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After Death: The Chronicles of Valjiro - Chapter 1

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Well...I'm biting the bullet, I guess. Over the last few months, I've been attempting to write a book. It's awful, I'm sure...frankly, the thought of others reading it terrifies me. The dialogue is clunky and unrealistic at best, the descriptions ham-fisted, etc. etc. But here it is - the first chapter. I'm not sure what else to do with it, so I suppose I'll just leave it here. The one thought I keep having during all of this is: would anyone want to keep reading this? If you glanced over this chapter, would you want to see more?
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42Ly's avatar
One question: time period? :)